Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Layout: Shot #1 [The Call]

video

as you can see I have changed a few things in the initial layout.
please comment and more than that.. suggest before I move on to my blocking///

setting: there is a table and the black thing on that table is a photo frame..
[refer animatics for details]


sorry for the awkward lighting..
off to dive with more references!

7 comments:

Nilabh said...

Nope. Its totally not working according to me. half of the frame is empty on the right side. So the balance is off and we have to FIND the character in the frame. Try changing it and giving the table LESS space in the frame.

Nilabh said...

The Poses looks very nice though! :-)

Mitali P said...

:o ok boss.. thanx

Sumit said...

Waiting to see the animation..keep it up....

dapOOn said...

i agree with nilabh. we're missing all his brilliant poses just because it's BLOCKED by that table. why not have the table placed on the right side instead of left. either that, or have the character enter from right. we need to see him COMPLETE from head to toe! however in either case, i feel the table's eating up to much of the frame!

good going though! waiting to see more of it! :)

Mitali P said...

hahah dapoon ''brilliant poses?'' i get the satire..

dapOOn said...

satire?? no satire there!! :-|